Double Page Spread 3

After presenting my first designs to my target audience I came across several barriers which prove that the design was not effective and did not look very appealing to my target audience. They had told me that the page was not organised and looked unprofessional and that I had to rearrange the text to make it look more appealing. I also found out that the text colour was not effective and was not complimented by the background image which made it hard to read. Acting on the feedback provided I decided to change the layout and design of the pages.