You have clearly done your research and you have produced a well written and quite thorough piece, using appropriate language and following a coherent structure. YOu have attempted to follow layout conventions, which is mainly succesful. YOu have used elements such as columns, appropriate pictures, and a header. There are some blank spaces which could be filled. Vanessa
You have clearly done your research and you have produced a well written and quite thorough piece, using appropriate language and following a coherent structure. YOu have attempted to follow layout conventions, which is mainly succesful. YOu have used elements such as columns, appropriate pictures, and a header. There are some blank spaces which could be filled. Vanessa
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